The intro right through to 1.21 is simply jaw dropping - isolating that part of the melody really allowed an entirely different interpretation and it sounds sad, forlorn, reaching or yearning.
After that section the build toward bombast is great, the pauses create more points of difference but it sounds a little too safe or resolved to me.
The electro instruments are well placed & do their work very well. The bass is very cool.
That "overdubbed" sound is pretty good mate. You do it so well.
I enjoyed the electrified solo particularly when it got grumpy/rock'n'rolly - reminded me of Sigfried Carver's playing on the 1st Pavlov's Dog album.