In an effort to try and write better songs I came up with this tune.
I'm looking for comments on the song writing more than anything else,..but always appreciate input on mixing and whatever. (i need all the help I can get)
I spent more time recording and mixing the acoustic version so that is probably the better mix,..and is the one i personally like more. Theres also a rock version of it as well if ya wanna take a listen.
Thanks for takin' the time and any input.
Take 'er easy,..
Calwood
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/davejam_music.htm
"Shattered (Acoustic)"
I'm looking for comments on the song writing more than anything else,..but always appreciate input on mixing and whatever. (i need all the help I can get)
I spent more time recording and mixing the acoustic version so that is probably the better mix,..and is the one i personally like more. Theres also a rock version of it as well if ya wanna take a listen.
Thanks for takin' the time and any input.
Take 'er easy,..
Calwood
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/davejam_music.htm
"Shattered (Acoustic)"