See me now...

Bump...

I plan to redo the vocals in a few days when my voice recovers from the day's festivities...

thanks,

-jD
 
I love it. I think the piano is a little loud in comparison with the vocals.

Percussion would be a nice touch. Even fingersnaps would support that great classic stabbing piano.

But I could see a case for leaving it.

I thought the ending was kind of weak, but all in all what a very nice little song.




More please.
 
Thanks man!

I know the end is weak, I might just end it abruptly... I'm not sure yet. I am definitely going to try some percussion, pry kinda simple tho.

Thanks again,

-jD
 
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