Hi fam.
Been building beats for a dozen+ years, have recorded some heavy hitters but was always shy of the mic myself until recently. So now it's a bit of a mish mash of my talents and a bit rough but tried doing a lot with this from a simple R&B hook, to harmonizing, to a rap at 3:10 on top of a nice neutral beat...
Defeat analysis even though it's a rough:
* Too much autoboob.
* Got too excited, isn't a full track (yet).
* It's not always what you write, it's what you say and how you say/sing it.
(^ I ended up chopping a lot of lines or shortening them just to mess around with arrangements.
* No real bridge.
* Mix needs some tlc on the voxes & low end.
* Perhaps it could use another lead/accent throughout...
Feedback?
Also question: How ugly/gutter are we allowed to post, I have a few tracks that aren't so family friendly...?
Been building beats for a dozen+ years, have recorded some heavy hitters but was always shy of the mic myself until recently. So now it's a bit of a mish mash of my talents and a bit rough but tried doing a lot with this from a simple R&B hook, to harmonizing, to a rap at 3:10 on top of a nice neutral beat...
Defeat analysis even though it's a rough:
* Too much autoboob.
* Got too excited, isn't a full track (yet).
* It's not always what you write, it's what you say and how you say/sing it.
(^ I ended up chopping a lot of lines or shortening them just to mess around with arrangements.
* No real bridge.
* Mix needs some tlc on the voxes & low end.
* Perhaps it could use another lead/accent throughout...
Feedback?
Also question: How ugly/gutter are we allowed to post, I have a few tracks that aren't so family friendly...?
