Thank you both for the replies! Here is a second, errr, 5th try at this mix. yes, I've tried to tame the savage beast cymbals first off. I tried to add a little more punch to bass drum without it taking over the whole bottom end. and as for the bass, I cut the freqs below 150 ish and raised the low middle a bit. Sometimes there is no much you can do with a Hofner. I'm normally a rhythm guitarist so I play with a pick and I know that kinda adds to the dilemma. I also recut the vocals and added a bit of harmony. Don't worry, I still have the original vox track.
Chili, you are correct, I don't have the best room for mixing. I'm not a pro, just a hobbyist so make do with what I've got.
BroKen_H, It was that slap back I added to the vocals that made it leftist. I tweeked that too.
I hope this sounds better. Thanks again for the input. Although I've had radio broadcasting in school and have been in and out of bands for years, this mixing stuff can be over my head someitmes.