Rihanna - Diamonds Demo (Metal Cover)

[Prospector]

Hi guys. So Im creating metal music using virtual instruments. This is my new demo can u tell me when can be done better and what is fine in mix ?
Thank you very much for any help.

 

[Robus]

It's not as annoying as the original. You've got some kind of upper mid-range buildup going on. Her voice is harsh to begin with, and it sounds like the virtual instruments or processing is adding to that.

 

[ido1957]

The lead vocal drops too much when the metal parts start. The parts you've added are too distorted for this type of mix. It's fizzy and not defined.
Try rolling back on the distortion and get some beef into added parts. Creative though, the parts work but again the sound doesn't blend.