R&B joint "Dance Wit Me"

[vmock]

this what I have so far, Im still tryna define the chrous, but check it out, Im starting to learn they keyboard finally

Dance Wit Me (Instrumental)
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5248503&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=5248503&q=hi

 

[Fyre]

not bad fam.... the intro is alil all ova the place.. but im diggin the melody.... the mix is off and the arangement needs work imo... but other then that i like... i would also say work on layering your drums or fattenin umm up especially the snare.....

 

[vmock]

thanx for the advice, I've been pretty much on stuck how to clean it up....but I'll be sure to do that