R&B based song; any opinions?

The lead vocals are realy hard to understand without reading the posted lyrics along. I dont think it was a recording issue as much as it is technique issue. Just try to be a touch more articulate and also, a little less effect on the voice might help. The fake clapping sound was annoying the crap out of me..... it was too much in your face and way too fake sounding. You may wanna think about pulling them back a bit and maybe adding a little effect to help them blend better. It's really a decent song and I think with a little tweaking in the re-record it could be nice. Think about how to mix-it-up a little and make it a little less monotonous unless thats what your going for. Good work!
 
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