Please review 2nd mix

[iownrocknroll]

Hi Guys this is our 2nd mix of this song. I want to know what everyone thinks.

There is more to the tune, this is just the "body" theirs is an intro and outro that is this 3/4 circus kind of part.

I will be adding an organ and string section to the this as well.
I am thinking about dropping the vocal doubling during the verses and maybe adding a long vocal delay during the chorus's.
Maybe dropping the snare 2 db and adding a bit more 2-3 k to the kick.

Thanks,
Jon

http://www.jonmillermusic.com/atlasmp3/BreathIn_V2 (3).wav

 

[jlewis]

Can you get anymore chunk to that guitar? It feels a little thin to me. I also think there are some spots that feel a little empty, but adding some organs and strings like you were saying could fill that out.