There's a grating edge to the vocals, and a bit of flanging there too. I'm guessing you boosted some of the upper mids and doubled your vocal to try to help it cut through. It's not really working. The vocal is still getting masked. It sounds like your primary aim was to get the guitars and drums prominent, and then shoehorn in the vocal. You might want to rethink it, get the vocal sounding good and selling the lyric first, then build around that.