I'll crank it up and type as I listen since I see this is a long one...
Wow this one gets going right away, cool. The guitar at 0:17 sounds a bit back in the mix, there's a lot going on over it
The :40 part with the piano is nice, catchy
Even around 1:20, the lead electric sounds too low or could use some meating up IMO... it might just be my system too
Maybe lowering some of the high end on the jangly guitar might open it up a bit.
The 3:10 part rocks.
The 5:00 part, nice transistion. Sounds like the track shoots into space there or something. It gets all trippy for awhile. very cool sounds and mixing throughout that section. Definite floyd action there!
That's real cool when the piano comes in at 9:25 too.
Very cool song man, nice work