Good job. I'm not crazy about the song, but you did well recording it. You didn't use as much reverb on this one as the previous, which is a good thing. Keep posting.
I think Armistice means to point out that you haven't said what you are looking for in posting this: Comments, suggestions, and criticisms? I've heard and commented on at least two other of your videos, so I feel like I know where you are coming from.