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[FunkDaddy]

Entry for a song contest, sounds great on the studio monitors, not so great on the laptop. I'd like to find a happy medium so I'm looking for thoughts on how it sounds on all setups, thanks!

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7538322

I've got a few spots where I'll probably re-do the vocals

 

[Waffleness]

I like your voice, sounds great for this genre of music. I can imagine this working really well if you could clear up the bass and guitar recordings. They are a bit muddy (I think the bass is too loud). How did you record them?

Where did you record the vocals? The room sounds a bit like a bathroom But your voice is great, I think you need to find a new room/reverb plugin

 

[FunkDaddy]

New mix up!

Tried some different 'verbs, remixed and fixed some of the pitchy vocal areas. Added a bit of electric guitar to punch up the chorus' and outro.

Thanks Waffle!

 

[Waffleness]

Thats much better, the changes really had a good effect! Well done, really got the bass under control.

Verb is better as well, it sounds much more open and makes it breathe when compared with before

Nice work.