Opinions on Decipha track

[Decipha]

Be honest, does this sound like shit or is it just me?

Decipha - L.O.G.

Does the string sound like its about 25ms off from the piano?

Don't mind the gun cock or gun shot that was there for the vocals.

 

[Decipha]

I changed the notes on the string now it has a smoother flow

i'll upload the new file asap

 

[Decipha]

updated**

just click the link

Decpha - L.O.G. (instrumental)


can some one give me a quick review of it?

 

[ctp_killacam]

Shit.........

 

[RhythmRmixd]

You need to tune that piano sound or whatever it is. It sticks out like a sore thumb. Just my 2 cents....

 

[Decipha]

Shit.........

that's what i thought

You need to tune that piano sound or whatever it is. It sticks out like a sore thumb. Just my 2 cents....

you talking about the "guitar"?

the piano at the beginning or the guitar that walks the strings?

 

[pkmusic]

you talking about the "guitar"?

the piano at the beginning or the guitar that walks the strings?[/QUOTE]


It seems like it may be the guitar. Have you thought about changing up the notes. Maybe instead of going down a half step, go down a full step on the lowest note. Ex:

Bb-Bb-Bb-Bb- B -Bb-Bb-Bb- Ab-Bb-Bb

or

Bb-Bb-Bb-Bb- Db -Bb-Bb-Bb- Ab-Bb-Bb

The notes may be off tune on the guitar also.

 

[RhythmRmixd]

Yea, I guess it is a guitar. You're playing it on top of the strings as 1/16 note staccato-like stabs. It's way out of tune.

 

[Decipha]

how does it sound now?

 

[Decipha]

i know holy old thread batman..

... just got back to this track for an upcoming album​

 

[Decipha]

ttt come on some one a quick review will suffice just need advice on improvements

 

[jugalo180]

I can't download the file, did you remove it?

 

[Decipha]

i removed the original look 3 posts up ^^

better yet heres the new version

CLICK HERE