Rock Star 87
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I wrote this song some time ago, and I'm not sure if it's still worth recording. Any opinions on the song (music and/or lyrics) are greatly appreciated, and all feedback is accepted. Thanks a bunch.
Speedy Speed Girl
Verse 1 (Dustin)
When I saw you come around, I was breathless
When you smiled, I was defenseless
What a beautiful creature that just walked by
My knees gave out, I was ready to fly
What should I do, introduce myself
Told her my name, told her how I felt
She just laughed and said take my hand
Follow me, I'll show you who I am
Chorus (Kristine)
I am tomorrow’s rainbow, I am who you wanna know
Whenever you’re feeling down, I will make you feel at home
I will take you to heaven, baby we are on the brink
I will show you ecstasy, you won’t ever have to think
Wherever you are, even when this life’s unfair
Worry not I will be there, You will have nothing to fear
Let me be your speedy speed girl
(screams) Come on now!
Verse 2 (Dustin)
Now I'm flying along on top of the clouds
Overwhelmed by the love that I found
Walking through a city of music and lights
Forever I will cherish Tokyo nights
I feel something in my heart so pure and true
I feel there's no limit to the things I can do
As we’re kissing, she nodded her head
Looked in my eyes, smiled and said
Chorus (Kristine)
Verse 3 (Dustin)
As we walked, my heart was still in the sky
Just being with me, she made me feel high
But this moment I knew, could not stay
It was time for her to go away
But I know I will never forget
Her face, her eyes, her smile when we met
I often wonder if I will see her again
Another time, another place, another world, another bend
Chorus (Kristine)
Speedy Speed Girl (Music)
Speedy Speed Girl
Verse 1 (Dustin)
When I saw you come around, I was breathless
When you smiled, I was defenseless
What a beautiful creature that just walked by
My knees gave out, I was ready to fly
What should I do, introduce myself
Told her my name, told her how I felt
She just laughed and said take my hand
Follow me, I'll show you who I am
Chorus (Kristine)
I am tomorrow’s rainbow, I am who you wanna know
Whenever you’re feeling down, I will make you feel at home
I will take you to heaven, baby we are on the brink
I will show you ecstasy, you won’t ever have to think
Wherever you are, even when this life’s unfair
Worry not I will be there, You will have nothing to fear
Let me be your speedy speed girl
(screams) Come on now!
Verse 2 (Dustin)
Now I'm flying along on top of the clouds
Overwhelmed by the love that I found
Walking through a city of music and lights
Forever I will cherish Tokyo nights
I feel something in my heart so pure and true
I feel there's no limit to the things I can do
As we’re kissing, she nodded her head
Looked in my eyes, smiled and said
Chorus (Kristine)
Verse 3 (Dustin)
As we walked, my heart was still in the sky
Just being with me, she made me feel high
But this moment I knew, could not stay
It was time for her to go away
But I know I will never forget
Her face, her eyes, her smile when we met
I often wonder if I will see her again
Another time, another place, another world, another bend
Chorus (Kristine)
Speedy Speed Girl (Music)