hehe, funny post, i wanted to reply with a real serious opinion on Mixdowns...
but then i saw² the link
for me the drums miss a little bit of high end...maybe your personal choise,
but i do like the kick and snare, not my favorite sound but they do cut trough the mix, and i've heard hiphop where you just HOPE there's drums but can't really tell what you hear
i've heard alot of underground hiphop and mostly the vocals are crap, here they're OK, volume is good compared with the music i think
so the only thing that i really notice is that you could put some more brightness in the mix,
and i like special FX is this kind of music, but real short,
like one second of "radio voice" on the vocals, or on the drums,
a reversed snare somewhere...
you know, like One Hit effects just for fun, not all the time
but i'm not good in critisizing hiphop since i don't listen to lyrics, only to music, and this is all electronical so i can't say that the guitars suck
not bad
...edit= Lofi might not be the word, but Old style yes, indeed, and if thats the sound you're after you're going the right direction !
i'm not into hiphop so i'm wondering where the fill ins, solo's and doubled takes are