Lots of excess noise, my guess is that it is from the vocals....it seems to go away when the vocals end and starts up right before the vocals come back in.....
Maybe also try it in a different key? The vocals sound flat at times and the voice sounds strained a lot of the times....
thnx for your time
after i posted it
i saw one favorite movie of mine nd realised
i didn't deliver enough of power in singing
so i resang it again
will post the result soon
this time i think i got it right
thnx again
Your singing and "burpy" synth sounds are not from this planet...I don't especially like it, but it's original...I'll give you that. It borderlines on really bad, but then somehow is saved because it is soooo bad and bizarre, it is kinda ok.. Now isn't that what everyone wants to say about it??
Sorry man, doesn't really change much that I notice...
There is a really bad hiss still, and the vocals are actually, and I hate to be so harsh, pretty bad. Again, it sounds like the singer is trying to sing out of his range or something....