Strat1958
Late-blooming songwriter!
Well, this is definitely going to be the most depressing song I have written...not much positivity around the theme of empty or emptiness!
So...here is a first draft.
GONE © 2009 Mike Pilling
Empty house, empty streets
Same old same old, just repeats
Empty feeling in my soul
You had gone
Empty nights, empty days
Stumbling through it, in a haze
It was out, of my control
Since you’d gone
[CH]
Coming home, the room was cold
Overnight, I felt so old
Coming home, the light was on
But it was dark because you’d gone
How did I help, create this mess?
The whistling wind, cried emptiness
I heard a voice outside the door
But you’d gone
I wouldn’t change, I wouldn’t say
That everything was not OK
My footsteps echoed, on the floor
Cause you’d gone
[BRIDGE]
Now there’s a phrase, time has a way
And tomorrow doesn’t have to be today
Don’t start over – start again
Rays of sunshine through the rain
[CH]
Coming home, the room is cool
For my part, I feel a fool
Coming home, the light is on
Xxxxxxxx (working on this line, but want it to be something implying a cautiously hopeful future)
So...here is a first draft.
GONE © 2009 Mike Pilling
Empty house, empty streets
Same old same old, just repeats
Empty feeling in my soul
You had gone
Empty nights, empty days
Stumbling through it, in a haze
It was out, of my control
Since you’d gone
[CH]
Coming home, the room was cold
Overnight, I felt so old
Coming home, the light was on
But it was dark because you’d gone
How did I help, create this mess?
The whistling wind, cried emptiness
I heard a voice outside the door
But you’d gone
I wouldn’t change, I wouldn’t say
That everything was not OK
My footsteps echoed, on the floor
Cause you’d gone
[BRIDGE]
Now there’s a phrase, time has a way
And tomorrow doesn’t have to be today
Don’t start over – start again
Rays of sunshine through the rain
[CH]
Coming home, the room is cool
For my part, I feel a fool
Coming home, the light is on
Xxxxxxxx (working on this line, but want it to be something implying a cautiously hopeful future)