Thanks for sharing this, it takes a lot of guts when you're first getting started. Vocals sound nice, and the reverb you chose suits the song and genre.
Besides the obvious chorus volume vs rest of song issue), here are some problems:
-Acoustic guitar is way too bright. Sounds like there's a high pass filter up to 200hz or so. If that's how it was recorded straight from the mic, then re-record and get some of that low end in. If you killed the low end with EQ, bring it back. Lowest fundamental frequency on guitar is around 80hz. Don't HPF higher than that if the acoustic is the primary instrument in the song.
-Acoustic guitar has a weird stereo phasing thing: it floats from L to R channels here and there. Either correct the phase or, better yet, stick to 1 mic on a single source while learning. Be great at getting a good sound from 1 mic before trying to use 2.
-Toms are mixed too high in proportion to the rest of the drums
-Kick drum is buried or indistinct. Either bring the fader up, or use EQ/compression to bring out the low woof (70-80hz) and beater (2khz), and kill some of the boxy mids.
-Bass is equally buried. Bring that bad boy up.
Keep at it man!