Why No DAW?Yes. I have effectuated your suggestions. It's sounds better, I agree. Now all I have to do is record a better vocal rendition, but that will have to wait as I had a small
vocal accident a few days ago while working on a new song without being adequately warmed up. When I have completed a new totally modified mix, I'll
send you an mp3, OK?
Hello. Thank you for your well-meant criticism. Here’s the third and last mix of this particular song. I personally like what I hear; I could, of course go on and on, adding background voices, electric guitar, etc. but when I consider the total futility of trying to make my tunes sound as if they had been “produced” professionally, I don’t insist too much on trying to perfect them, I’m sure you’ll understand. The work I’m doing right now is much more “roots” - simple, acoustic. And no, I’ve never paid particular attention to what Genesis was doing.I agree with Gecko's comments. Even in the second version, which did sound better, the vocals were still too up front (IMO), and the glock was way too loud.
Sounds as though you're a fan of Genesis, huh?
It's very simple. It would be too wearisome for my eyes.Why No DAW?
Wow ... I would think you would really dig Genesis (talking about earlier Genesis) after hearing this track. But who knows, though. Anyway ...Hello. Thank you for your well-meant criticism. Here’s the third and last mix of this particular song. I personally like what I hear; I could, of course go on and on, adding background voices, electric guitar, etc. but when I consider the total futility of trying to make my tunes sound as if they had been “produced” professionally, I don’t insist too much on trying to perfect them, I’m sure you’ll understand. The work I’m doing right now is much more “roots” - simple, acoustic. And no, I’ve never paid particular attention to what Genesis was doing.
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