New Track, Skimming along the banks of disaster

Twampy

Twampy

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Hi all,
I had posted this in the mix section but was advised to put it here.
My 2nd track that I have done.
On the mix section I was recommended to to bring the vocals more into the center which I am working on at the moment so this version still has the vocals quite wide.
It's a sad song but I like it.
Be gentle or brutal whatever takes you.
https://soundcloud.com/twampy/skimming-along-the-banks-of
 
I thought most of the backing tracks were fine. It was pretty easy to tell the drums were canned.

If it were me, I'd take all the effects off the vocal, especially the stereo delay. I also thought the reverb was way too heavy.

The low is probably a little too heavy. It's a bit rumbly.

I'm hearing a couple of vocal aritifacts - clicks and such. e.g., 2:54.
 
I'm guessing you haven't used much high pass/low cut filtering? because if not, that would really clean up the mix and help seperate each track from one another, especially on some of the guitar tracks in the song.
 
I used a multiband compressor in the master and that was about it apart from a little eq.
 
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