New To Mixing vocals..Need Feedback

[beebellmusic]

Im just learning how to mix vocals, as im stuck in the middle of no where on house arrest for 6 months so i had to invest in a little home studio and learn everything on my own. Im improving slowly but could benefit from some of your guys feed back and advice. Im using a at 2020 ran through a blue icicle usb interface m recording with cool edit pro 2.
heres the mix:
Coldworld by Beebellmusic

 

[beebellmusic]

Coldworld by Beebellmusic

 

[ido1957]

Coldworld by Beebellmusic

Sounds good but vocals may be a little up front for me. Interesting lyrics - are they a true story? House arrest for drugs ? or Assault? WHose house?

 

[beebellmusic]

yeah theyre a true story , and aggravated assault and my house lol

 

[ido1957]

Aggravated - what weapon was involved?

 

[beebellmusic]

magic wand