Buffalo Bob
New member
A little ballad to my girl. It's called "She"
http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=1624&alid=-1
http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=1624&alid=-1

No kidding. Let's see, there's Triple M's tribute, then there's Gidge's ditty for his angel, and there's THIS excellent tune from Buffalo Bob, and...let's see...what else was there? Seems like there was another tune involving somebody's daughter somewhere... Oh well, it'll come to me.twist said:Dads and daughters. Seems to be a trend here. Hope it continues.

they already said some support vocals in small places would lift it a bit.
... some "Pachebel's Canon"-ish stuff in the intro... synths sound a bit dated, but that's the only crit. Acoustic sounds wonderful... vocal performance is good; great emotion... the wifey probably gave you a large... hug after hearing this the first time 
Your hit hat and toms are also too quantized.... I'm guessing you may have clicked the drum beat onto a staff with a mouse.... Try playing the hi hat and tom parts in on a keyboard. If you don't have a musical keyboard, there are some programs that let you use your typing keyboard to enter midi notes. Then just go in and make sure the accented hits are louder than the rest by editing the midi parameters. Finally, come up with another 2 or 3 drum fills and intersperse them in the song so the drums don't repeat as much.