Well guys I wrote a kind of a sad song but not with the usual structure. If it's any good and worth improving, please tell me how and what i should work on and take care of while writing songs. Well here it is.
Walking slowly hands held tight
Crossing hurdles one by one
Not realising that
Slowly in love we had fallen
That day under the shade of the tree
We had promised
Holding hands together
The two of us will always be
Walking alongside each other hand in hand
We turn towards each other and smile
You're face, You're smile, So unforgettable
Why did it only have to last a while
I was so mezmorized
That I did not realise
That you were shedding tears
So beautiful were your eyes
By the time I had noticed it was too late
Your eyes looked at me filled with hate
Slowly letting go, you started to walk away
I try to follow but the distance keeps getting bigger
Our rope of love.. Thinner than a feather
I slowly fall down stumbling..
Trying to get up but falling down again..
Too great to bear the pain..
I close my eyes and rest eternally...
P.S, I don't have any sort of music for my songs nor any vocals so singers and music composers always welcome ^_^
Walking slowly hands held tight
Crossing hurdles one by one
Not realising that
Slowly in love we had fallen
That day under the shade of the tree
We had promised
Holding hands together
The two of us will always be
Walking alongside each other hand in hand
We turn towards each other and smile
You're face, You're smile, So unforgettable
Why did it only have to last a while
I was so mezmorized
That I did not realise
That you were shedding tears
So beautiful were your eyes
By the time I had noticed it was too late
Your eyes looked at me filled with hate
Slowly letting go, you started to walk away
I try to follow but the distance keeps getting bigger
Our rope of love.. Thinner than a feather
I slowly fall down stumbling..
Trying to get up but falling down again..
Too great to bear the pain..
I close my eyes and rest eternally...
P.S, I don't have any sort of music for my songs nor any vocals so singers and music composers always welcome ^_^