new song with dummy lyrics..

groovejunkie

groovejunkie

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..dummy lyrics cos I had none, so I sung the first words that came in my dizzy head - I know that the bass is played like s%@t, there are a lotta bad edits & crappy licks - it's just the first take - I came yesterday home drunk and made it - quick and dirty

so, I just want to know if it's worth to work on it or just throw it away

it's called "headbanging"

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=2240&alid=-1

cheers&thanks
 
There is a tune here!

Since its a rough draft I won't comment on the mix. Here is my take.

I would work on it! (If thats your real question) It is long for the format, meaning it doesn't go enough places for a tune bordering on 5 minutes. Trim it up or add some changes. Nice riff there, it can turn into something!

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Liked the intro riff, that chord at :44 reminds me totally of Black Sabbath.

As I got deeper into the song, I started to drift a little bit. I'd say go through it and strain it, so all you've got left is the striking ideas.

Good luck, if you decide to continue through i'd like to hear the next version.
 
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