lyrics/song up for review would like advice on the writing/compostion.
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I've Been
Will Nealy
Have you ever taken a chance
on someone that hasn't lasted
have you ever taken a chance
and gone the extra mile
will you ever sentence me
to your imortality
and do you think that we will stand
after the fight is over
I've been asking for the one to say your name
and I've been hoping for the one to say your game
everystep we take
is down the wrong road
we thought we had it all
but we werent thinking right
the bottle falls and shatters
breaking on the floor
the earth and the fire
warm your hearts desire
I've been hoping for the one to hold your hand
I've been asking for vacations to your land
And i've wandered
and i've hobbled to
all in time with
the beat of my aching heart.
I've been asking for the one to say your name
and I've been hoping for the one to say your game
I've been hoping for the one to hold your hand
I've been asking for vacations to your land
http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/?aid=3300/singles
I've Been
Will Nealy
Have you ever taken a chance
on someone that hasn't lasted
have you ever taken a chance
and gone the extra mile
will you ever sentence me
to your imortality
and do you think that we will stand
after the fight is over
I've been asking for the one to say your name
and I've been hoping for the one to say your game
everystep we take
is down the wrong road
we thought we had it all
but we werent thinking right
the bottle falls and shatters
breaking on the floor
the earth and the fire
warm your hearts desire
I've been hoping for the one to hold your hand
I've been asking for vacations to your land
And i've wandered
and i've hobbled to
all in time with
the beat of my aching heart.
I've been asking for the one to say your name
and I've been hoping for the one to say your game
I've been hoping for the one to hold your hand
I've been asking for vacations to your land