New song I'm writing!

[mrhotapples]

I'm a poor drummer, lol. But I thought this was sounding really good so I'd like some opinions. I think the snare's too loud and will become especially problematic when I write and record vocal parts.

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?id=12204

 

[DavidK]

Sounds good, its got a little reggae thang going on. Not much to say without the vocals.

 

[zazz]

bass is way too low volume and clicky for this kind of thing ..unless bass free reggae is what you are going for.....also bum dischord notes.....

 

[ido1957]

I don't know zazz - the bass is there but it's really treble-y. I'd try adding some bottom to the bass and see if you can add some oomph to it. That will fill out the whole spectrum too I think. I like the snap on the bass though so try and keep that if you can...