New Song, Feedback would be great!

[Greykitkat36]

My band Cotton put this out yesterday, our friend had done the mixing and mastering up in NYC. Check it out. Any feedback appreciated:

New Cotton Single!!
Now and Then by cottonband on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
Preorder the album now, here! (pay what you want!) In The Basement | Cotton

 

[PoeticIntensity]

Initial thoughts are

- Vocals during first verse are barely intelligible.
- Too many instruments doing too many things... Piano possibly too loud?
- Chorus electric guitars (R / L) doing different things causes a bit of confusion. Too much going on, still.
- Chorus rhythm seems disjointed due to electric guitars and drums being slightly off (purposely, I believe)
- Bridge is pretty cool! Still a whole heckuva lot going on.
- Kick drum seems wooden. EQ needs a bit of tweaking.

Production quality seems to be quite high, but there are a few things that need work. Performances, however, all around were quite good.

Thanks for sharing!

 

[Greykitkat36]

fixed some issues with it, let me know if this is better. Thanks, I appreciate feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/cottonband/now-and-then#

If you like it, feel free to pre-order our full album (coming in sept.) for whatever price you desire.

In The Basement | Cotton

 

[Greykitkat36]

Anyone else have any thoughts?

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The soundcloud player is underneath the logo, it has the song.