New song; Demeure

[Jack Real]

Hi

I just finished this new song called "Demeure". I posted that song while I was still working on it but now, it is completed.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=662429

Since I have all the instruments in wave, I'm thinking about sending this at a professional studio to get it mixed but I don't know if it's good enough. Let me know what you think.

Thanks,

Jack Real.

 

[Dogman]

Cool sounds Jack....nice playing also. Good job on the vocals...

I'm listening on headphones, and the mix sounds pretty good here.

 

[Jack Real]

Hi Dogman

Thanks for the comments. It was the first time I recorded vocals in my new condo and I had to make some adjustments but I think it's o.k. now.

Thanks again.

Jack Real.

 

[XLR]

Nice vocal. I like the reedy organ at 2:40. Low end is a little hot.

 

[Jack Real]

Hi Tim

Thanks for the comments. Yes, the base line is a bit busy. Maybe I will simplify it.

Thanks again.

/Jack Real

 

[XLR]

I didn't mean busy. I meant loud.

 

[Jack Real]

Hi Tim

Thanks for clarifying this.

/Jack Real.