Spin, see if you can edit your first post and put the new version there. I almost left the thread when it told me the track is not available. Luckily, I saw the up-dated mix a few posts later.
The song itself is good and you have a perfect voice for this. Like others have said, there is something about the mix that makes everything sound....I don't know...distant?....Not sure what the right word is. It's making my brain do the same thing it does when I hook my speakers up with one of them out of phase, something is weird. One thing I do hear for sure is way too much compression and/or limiting on the drums, or maybe the whole mix, because those cymbal crashes are distorting like a mofo.
Good, catchy hook in the chorus and generally a good song all around.