Strat1958
Late-blooming songwriter!
Just sat down in my sunroom, looking out at the water, felt inspired to write now that spring is in the air. So, here is my effort over the last 30 minutes...any suggestions would be appreciated. The feel is a Jimmy Buffett-style ballad.
Thanks! Mike
BLUE EYED COOL © Mike Pilling 2010
White sands and blue water
Every fool has his day
It’s hot and getting hotter
Dreaming the day away
Chorus
On my third drink or is it my eighth
Sittin on this barstool
She blows in like a coconut breeze
Blue-eyed cool
Inst
Boz sang about the Jamaican bay
Of course this ain’t that place
A few miles south of Monterey
The sea shows mighty grace
Chorus
The surf is crashing behind my back
But I’m wastin time like a fool
She’s in the dark but she’s in the light
Blue eyed cool
Bridge
Do I dare to look her way
It’s like looking at the sun
Easier to turn away
Easier to run
Talk to myself some more
Let’s turn this thing around
But pulled like a magnet toward the door
I didn’t make a sound
Chorus
As I walk the path to the parking lot
Water sparkles like a jewel
The ocean breeze hits my open shirt
It’s blue eyed cool
Inst & fade
Thanks! Mike
BLUE EYED COOL © Mike Pilling 2010
White sands and blue water
Every fool has his day
It’s hot and getting hotter
Dreaming the day away
Chorus
On my third drink or is it my eighth
Sittin on this barstool
She blows in like a coconut breeze
Blue-eyed cool
Inst
Boz sang about the Jamaican bay
Of course this ain’t that place
A few miles south of Monterey
The sea shows mighty grace
Chorus
The surf is crashing behind my back
But I’m wastin time like a fool
She’s in the dark but she’s in the light
Blue eyed cool
Bridge
Do I dare to look her way
It’s like looking at the sun
Easier to turn away
Easier to run
Talk to myself some more
Let’s turn this thing around
But pulled like a magnet toward the door
I didn’t make a sound
Chorus
As I walk the path to the parking lot
Water sparkles like a jewel
The ocean breeze hits my open shirt
It’s blue eyed cool
Inst & fade
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