New Hardcore Song

[HydrantC12]

Hey...I've had stuff critiqued here before and i got good feedback. It would be awsome if you could give me some on this mix. The song is called "Containment." Im the vocalist and the engineer so any feedback would be great. Let me know anything that you think can be improved, that i did well, etc. Thanks alot!

Link:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=434966

 

[Supercreep]

The drums are too naked at 1:00 - it needs some meat holding that rhythm together imo. Nice work, altogether. I'm listening on cheap headphones, but it sounds pretty good to me.

 

[HydrantC12]

thanks for the input dude

 

[GWAR129]

Kick Ass!

THE SONG KICKED ASS DUDE!! Good job. the vocals reminded me of Hatebreed.
Overall it was great man.

 

[HydrantC12]

awsome dude..thanks alot

 

[HydrantC12]

cmonnn guysss..help me out here. any feedback at all would help me out alot

 

[true-eurt]

Cool tune. Liked the geetars.