These are purely my own reactions to the composition. Others might respond differently to the music. It starts to lose me about 1:30, when you go from a louder part to a softer part, and then especially about 2:00 where the kick drops out altogether. Often in electronic music you'll have a part with a driving beat that gives way to a more restrained section, then builds again. Whereas here, you have the music dropping, then dropping still more. That, together with the beat falling out, kills the excitement for me.
As dance music, I think you're going to lose the dancers. If it's electronica, as opposed to purely dance music, you have greater latitude.
Again, my subjective reactions.