New Beats...feedback please

stray411

stray411

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Here's my first batch for the new year. I'm looking for some feedback on the mixing specifically. That's my biggest weakness...but I think I'm getting better. Let me know.

(The World) "Keeps Burning"
http://www.soundclick.com/pro/view/02/default.cfm?bandID=55949&content=song&songID=3499427


The next 2 beats are for a beat battle at: http://mpcguru.proboards62.com/index.cgi#general

We could only use the provided samples and our scratches and vocals. It's still going on, until the 22nd, in case anyone wants to get in.

"I Told Y'All"
http://www.soundclick.com/pro/view/02/default.cfm?bandID=55949&content=song&songID=3499403

"If U Could Be Mine"
http://www.soundclick.com/pro/view/02/default.cfm?bandID=55949&content=song&songID=3499386


I just made a MySpace page, so add me or however that goes. And let me know how to add people if you know.

http://www.myspace.com/perpetualproductions
 
hey man

yeh dude, sound great, ive been composin beats for a little while now, not too long, and this is real cool. the 25 or 6 to 4 sample is killer, and i like the vocals, real cool...keep it up man
-jake
 
I added you, to add folks all you need to do is go to their profile and click the add as friend button. They will get an email just like you will get in your myspace for approval.
 
The World...

Sounds real clean... This is dope... Vocal sample is cool... Drums nice.. This is a border line beat meaning it isn't strictly a Hip Hop track... Nice....


I told yall..

This is more of a hip hop track... Nice.. Like da snar.. This is coool.... Can is riding the beat too... Nice production....


If u could be mine..

This is real dope... J is really flowing on this... like the vibe of the beat.. This contest in your is requiring you to do a lot of things I like that..

Glad to see ya still bangin...

Raticus
 
That was crazy. I could see a whole lot of cats on that. like EM, Tupac, or Scarface, or one of the many that are coming up tryna sound like them. You've placed track with majors before right? If not you need to step your marketing game up Stray, because you've definitely got the sound, and quality.....Oh yeah, and I send an add to your myspace. It's under Braxx(my gov name)
 
Thanks for the feedback everybody. I'm having a problem with Outlook, which is why I haven't replied to the MySpace emails. I'll get at you cats soon.

@ Jake - Good call on the sample.

@ Murdock - Not yet...music has just been a side thing for a while, but I'm ready to get serious. I'm in the studio 24/7 right now. I'll start looking for placements soon...I just wanna make sure I'm ready.
 
Very nice sounding stuff, fam. I told ya'll is dope... I could really tear into that as an emcee...

I'm not at the studio on my monitors so, I can't be sure but... the mixing sounds good.
 
stray, those tracks sound piping hot man! I want to give you better feedback but I'll have to do it later.
 
wow, great beats. superb licks in the first one, mixed beautifully. Jays flow in the last one matches the beat perfectly, and the percussion is perfectly present, but not at all intrusive, really pushing the vocals to the front. awesome.
 
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