New Acoustic Song: Cut Print Repeat - feedback wanted!

[stopstartstall]

I just finished up a new song, feedback on the mix would be most appreciated!

Cut Print Repeat on Soundclick.

I know the gtrs aren't quite in sync at the beginning, I'm still waiting for my Naiants to turn up so I played the same thing twice with a mic in different positions... it took me the first riff to get in time, lol. Also I have a cold so some of the vocals are little scratchy in places.

 

[NL5]

To me it sounds kind of odd, but I hear a big potential in the song. As you pointed out, the guitar timing is off pretty bad. What I would start with is re-tracking the guitars like I pointed out in the other thread, or take these and edit them for time, and narrow the panning somewhat. At the same time, I'd work on making the vox bigger.

Are you a fan of Ben Barnett at all? I love some of the quirky little acoustic songs/covers he's done. This reminds me of that somewhat. I mean that in a good way.