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Super Perfectionist
Hi everyone!
I'm back and I've written this song. I wanted to know what your thoughts are on my track. I would appreciate any feedback, whether it's about mixing or lryics! Thanks
Lyrics:
It's time to wake up
And see what you have done
What happened while you're gone
Statistics tell the story
We all strive for the glory
But in the end it's gone
In the end it's gone
But In the end it's gone
We live inside a world
Where contradictory statements
Are everywhere like pavement
It's hard to judge what's true
The things you see in people
Is nothing but their shade
Some people seem displaced
A smoke screen over their faces
Inventing new things in their basement
But no one gives a shit
[CHORUS]
But what are you doing?
Is it something you would shout out,
Cause even the blue skies are fake,
Nothing but something illusions make,
Listen to the voice in your head,
Know why they said what they said,
Flashing lights in the distance,
The world only cares for those who are largest,
From the very beginning,
They favored some and the opposite for others,
Never know, never know, till it's over,
They'll keep looking back,
Maybe you're the poppy in the group and,
They just can't keep up,
[CHORUS]
But what are you doing?
Is it something you would shout out,
Cause even the blue skies are fake,
Nothing but something illusions make,
Listen to the voice in your head,
Know why they said what they said,
Sometimes we see the truth,
Conflicting lies, confused,
Just confide,
To me,
And now that time has gone,
We have no choice of freedom,
A universal catch-22,
It may all end as a checkmate,
Some people seemed dis-placed
A smoke screen lifts off his face,
He cleaned the mess in his basement,
And took a step outside,
[Final CHORUS]
And opened his eyes,
Cause he had something he could shout out!
Cause even the blue skies are real,
Not a cloud was in his viewpoint,
Listen to the voice in your head,
Know why they said what they said,
I'm back and I've written this song. I wanted to know what your thoughts are on my track. I would appreciate any feedback, whether it's about mixing or lryics! Thanks
Lyrics:
It's time to wake up
And see what you have done
What happened while you're gone
Statistics tell the story
We all strive for the glory
But in the end it's gone
In the end it's gone
But In the end it's gone
We live inside a world
Where contradictory statements
Are everywhere like pavement
It's hard to judge what's true
The things you see in people
Is nothing but their shade
Some people seem displaced
A smoke screen over their faces
Inventing new things in their basement
But no one gives a shit
[CHORUS]
But what are you doing?
Is it something you would shout out,
Cause even the blue skies are fake,
Nothing but something illusions make,
Listen to the voice in your head,
Know why they said what they said,
Flashing lights in the distance,
The world only cares for those who are largest,
From the very beginning,
They favored some and the opposite for others,
Never know, never know, till it's over,
They'll keep looking back,
Maybe you're the poppy in the group and,
They just can't keep up,
[CHORUS]
But what are you doing?
Is it something you would shout out,
Cause even the blue skies are fake,
Nothing but something illusions make,
Listen to the voice in your head,
Know why they said what they said,
Sometimes we see the truth,
Conflicting lies, confused,
Just confide,
To me,
And now that time has gone,
We have no choice of freedom,
A universal catch-22,
It may all end as a checkmate,
Some people seemed dis-placed
A smoke screen lifts off his face,
He cleaned the mess in his basement,
And took a step outside,
[Final CHORUS]
And opened his eyes,
Cause he had something he could shout out!
Cause even the blue skies are real,
Not a cloud was in his viewpoint,
Listen to the voice in your head,
Know why they said what they said,
