zer0sig
headpiece full of straw
i'd be happy to hear any feedback you guys have, especially constructive criticism. i know it's a little heavy on laterary devices in parts, but i'm hoping to play on that. also, i'm aware that the number of syllables per line is much less toward the end, something else i want to play on. in any case, enough of the whining, i'll let the lyrics do that for me (i'll even post guitar for good measure!)
guitar(drop d):
main-per each line-chords(strummed out in some multiple of 4's):
D3200
A1021
D3200
chorus-per the one line(similar strum pattern):
G-----1 or 3
D000001
A135551
D354321
the above D# is extended until i feel like ending the chorus with:
G2D0A0D0
lyrics:
the brightest star in my sky refuses to shine though the heavens burn
if i could only see it, i'd fix everything like i did last time
but my arms are weary of bearing burdens borne for a smile and a vacant sigh
and i think i may abandon this before the waters get too high
(chorus)
the sun is setting on the notion that i'm not just wasting time by holding onto hope
i'm still scarred since the last time that i meant to make a moment gold
i'm hesitant to hold my heart so open o'er a roaring flame
but born-in bearing beckons me to cast my carcass carelessly
like lumps of loam in lakes to dissipate so dissapointedly
the sun is setting on the notion that i'm not just wasting time by holding onto hope
so arm your rugged filters for an onslaught riding on the hands
of circumstance-my will is set and nothing will
deter me from promoting a connection to my destiny
i'll set my star alight if it will mean the very end of me
the sun is setting on the notion that i'm not just wasting time by holding onto hope
so far, the singing style is kind of a leonard cohen/kurdt cobain style, i guess, with a little ramping up for the chorus.
guitar(drop d):
main-per each line-chords(strummed out in some multiple of 4's):
D3200
A1021
D3200
chorus-per the one line(similar strum pattern):
G-----1 or 3
D000001
A135551
D354321
the above D# is extended until i feel like ending the chorus with:
G2D0A0D0
lyrics:
the brightest star in my sky refuses to shine though the heavens burn
if i could only see it, i'd fix everything like i did last time
but my arms are weary of bearing burdens borne for a smile and a vacant sigh
and i think i may abandon this before the waters get too high
(chorus)
the sun is setting on the notion that i'm not just wasting time by holding onto hope
i'm still scarred since the last time that i meant to make a moment gold
i'm hesitant to hold my heart so open o'er a roaring flame
but born-in bearing beckons me to cast my carcass carelessly
like lumps of loam in lakes to dissipate so dissapointedly
the sun is setting on the notion that i'm not just wasting time by holding onto hope
so arm your rugged filters for an onslaught riding on the hands
of circumstance-my will is set and nothing will
deter me from promoting a connection to my destiny
i'll set my star alight if it will mean the very end of me
the sun is setting on the notion that i'm not just wasting time by holding onto hope
so far, the singing style is kind of a leonard cohen/kurdt cobain style, i guess, with a little ramping up for the chorus.