Hi there, A friend of mine and i have made four songs in the last month or so. two have lyrics and two don't. the ones that do, are pretty goofy, but cool we think. the ones that don't, everyone tells us we need vocals. So, i woke up at 4 this morning with an idea for a song, and have gotten it mostly out. I need a little help with the chorus, and weould welcome any other comments and suggestions. Is this the best way to come up with a good song? do the lyrics first and then mold the music around it? it's all new to me....thanks in advance!!
Jason
The Way I Feel
By Jason C. Starbird
1st Verse
Why do I feel this way?
I love you more and more each day.
We’ve been together for so long.
I love you like a favorite song.
Being apart makes the heart grow stronger.
I can’t stand it for much longer.
2nd Verse
We’ve been together through thick and thin.
Sometimes we loose, sometimes we win.
It was true love at first sight.
I can’t wait to see you tonight.
3rd Verse
Why do I feel this way?
This feeling grows stronger day by day.
We’ve been together for this long.
I love you like a favorite song.
As the years go by and time gets longer.
My love for you keeps growing stronger.
You’re my sun, my moon, and my star so bright.
Being with you makes everything all right.
4th Verse
Why do I feel this way?
It’s all the little things you do and say.
A hug from you, a tender kiss.
Those are things I’ll never miss.
Our love is true; our passion’s deep.
My love for you is yours to keep.
5th Verse
Why do I feel this way?
We’ve been together for so long.
I love you like my favorite song.
This verse and chorus will never end.
You’re my life; you’re my best friend.
You’re my favorite song that will never end.
You’re my life; you are my best friend.
Chorus
The way I feel, is it really true?
Am I dreaming or is it really you?
You’re always there, right by my side.
I’m the luckiest man alive.
You’re effect on me is like the moon on the tide.
Jason
The Way I Feel
By Jason C. Starbird
1st Verse
Why do I feel this way?
I love you more and more each day.
We’ve been together for so long.
I love you like a favorite song.
Being apart makes the heart grow stronger.
I can’t stand it for much longer.
2nd Verse
We’ve been together through thick and thin.
Sometimes we loose, sometimes we win.
It was true love at first sight.
I can’t wait to see you tonight.
3rd Verse
Why do I feel this way?
This feeling grows stronger day by day.
We’ve been together for this long.
I love you like a favorite song.
As the years go by and time gets longer.
My love for you keeps growing stronger.
You’re my sun, my moon, and my star so bright.
Being with you makes everything all right.
4th Verse
Why do I feel this way?
It’s all the little things you do and say.
A hug from you, a tender kiss.
Those are things I’ll never miss.
Our love is true; our passion’s deep.
My love for you is yours to keep.
5th Verse
Why do I feel this way?
We’ve been together for so long.
I love you like my favorite song.
This verse and chorus will never end.
You’re my life; you’re my best friend.
You’re my favorite song that will never end.
You’re my life; you are my best friend.
Chorus
The way I feel, is it really true?
Am I dreaming or is it really you?
You’re always there, right by my side.
I’m the luckiest man alive.
You’re effect on me is like the moon on the tide.