Not bad at all. Well played. The lower end on this track is kind of spotty. At times it is very "boomy" and at others it is almost nonexistent. It seems that certain frequencies are being emphasized over others. I would prefer it to have a more even, tighter thump to it. Other than that, no complaints.
Well, i'll make my best attempt to sing on it. Btw, i compressed the entire track, just testing something, so thats why it's eqing is kinda wierd. But i'll try singing, tho i'm not to good at it.