Hey!
I just wanted to share, and hopefully get some feedback on this lyric I wrote some weeks ago.
I usually write very "dark" and "gloomy" texts, but on this I started with the intention of writing something a bit "happier" and "joyful". After some time brooding and thinking, i came up with the consept/idea of Moonlit Meadow.
I ended up describing a meadow, which is, at day, very happy. But day always ends up in night, and thats where my "dark and gloomy" writing enters. hehe. The meaning of the song, is of course not just the meadow. There is a message, or a plot, behind. I just used the meadow to describe that message.
I dont want to say anything about what I thought about writing this song, as I am very interested in other people interpret my lyrics.
Lyrics for me, is as important as the music that is with it. I have wrote some acoustic guitar to it, and vocals. Im actuall stuck at the "night". Cant seem to find any cool riffs that fits, yet.
well, enough talk. I just like to inform you guys about my intentions and thoughts(not all though )
Here it is:
Moonlit Meadow
Hear the rustling wind whisper
A song of innocence, a song of the past
The wagtails chitter and the fragrance of the forest fills the air
Flowers reaching for the sun
as leaves shiver, my presence slowly fade
As i am embraced with delight,
we become one
we become whole
A vigorous meadow stretching wide, it's treeline swaying with fierce intensity
rising like a tower of branches
Becoming a devious borderline
The sun sets in the horizon
a restless emotion cringe down my spine
as the absence of light surrounds me
We change in a blink of an eye
Deceiving you
Deceiving me
We yield(surrender) our profound dogma
Deceiving you
Deceiving me
The lunar light encloses the derelict meadow, shadows creeping in
A distant howl breaks the nights silence
Branches alter becoming creatures of the night
devoured, i slip into oblivion
You change in a blink of an eye
Deceiving you
Deceiving me
You mock our profound dogma
Deceiving you
Deceiving me
When that eerie feeling became
Perpetual
I finally knew
When that eerie feeling became
Perpetual
We finally knew
The sun rise in the horizon
giving us hope, forgotten hope
as the sunshine surrounds us
Hear the rustling wind whisper
A song of innocence, a song of the past
The wagtails chitter and the fragrance of the forest fills the air
Flowers reaching for the sun, leaves shiver
your presence slowly fade
As you are embraced with delight
We become whole
We become one
I would really appreciate feedback! Good things, bad things, how you interpreted it, what feelings and thoughts you got from it etc..
Haarfagr/Hakon
I just wanted to share, and hopefully get some feedback on this lyric I wrote some weeks ago.
I usually write very "dark" and "gloomy" texts, but on this I started with the intention of writing something a bit "happier" and "joyful". After some time brooding and thinking, i came up with the consept/idea of Moonlit Meadow.
I ended up describing a meadow, which is, at day, very happy. But day always ends up in night, and thats where my "dark and gloomy" writing enters. hehe. The meaning of the song, is of course not just the meadow. There is a message, or a plot, behind. I just used the meadow to describe that message.
I dont want to say anything about what I thought about writing this song, as I am very interested in other people interpret my lyrics.
Lyrics for me, is as important as the music that is with it. I have wrote some acoustic guitar to it, and vocals. Im actuall stuck at the "night". Cant seem to find any cool riffs that fits, yet.
well, enough talk. I just like to inform you guys about my intentions and thoughts(not all though )
Here it is:
Moonlit Meadow
Hear the rustling wind whisper
A song of innocence, a song of the past
The wagtails chitter and the fragrance of the forest fills the air
Flowers reaching for the sun
as leaves shiver, my presence slowly fade
As i am embraced with delight,
we become one
we become whole
A vigorous meadow stretching wide, it's treeline swaying with fierce intensity
rising like a tower of branches
Becoming a devious borderline
The sun sets in the horizon
a restless emotion cringe down my spine
as the absence of light surrounds me
We change in a blink of an eye
Deceiving you
Deceiving me
We yield(surrender) our profound dogma
Deceiving you
Deceiving me
The lunar light encloses the derelict meadow, shadows creeping in
A distant howl breaks the nights silence
Branches alter becoming creatures of the night
devoured, i slip into oblivion
You change in a blink of an eye
Deceiving you
Deceiving me
You mock our profound dogma
Deceiving you
Deceiving me
When that eerie feeling became
Perpetual
I finally knew
When that eerie feeling became
Perpetual
We finally knew
The sun rise in the horizon
giving us hope, forgotten hope
as the sunshine surrounds us
Hear the rustling wind whisper
A song of innocence, a song of the past
The wagtails chitter and the fragrance of the forest fills the air
Flowers reaching for the sun, leaves shiver
your presence slowly fade
As you are embraced with delight
We become whole
We become one
I would really appreciate feedback! Good things, bad things, how you interpreted it, what feelings and thoughts you got from it etc..
Haarfagr/Hakon