Hi!
My impressions - the cymbals in the intro are way too forward in the mix and are missing high end sizzle through the song.
Kick needs to get some serious low end, I'd say maybe 60hz, then add in some 6k to pull out the click so it cuts through. You may want to hit it hard with a compressor too so it pops during the double kick parts.
Snare is non-existent in sections of the song, definitely compress that sucker with a fast attack, play with the settings to bring out the snare's pop to help it cut through.
Guitars sound a bit thin, how do you have them currently EQ'd? The bass tone really isn't that bad at all, I think if you add just a bit of distortion to it, just a tiny tiny bit, it'll help out with the overall guitar sound as well.
I know that probably reads as a bit harsh, but you've definitely got the beginnings of a good mix
I think with some tweaking it'll be really good. If you're going for a late 80's prog metal sound, then you're definitely on the way!
Hope this helps!