Nice work Neil!
I'm tempted to add that I'd like to hear more air, space, reverb on the first guitar line...
...a touch of gated reverb and distortion on the drum line to make it pop out the speakers...be a bit more upfront...Were they originally that compressed?
...and some work on the gated synth line so that it occupies that more up-front space too. Perhaps rolling off the low-end, and bringing up the high-mids?
These are all just ideas though...
Here is my mix of your track. I did adjust the structure slightly.
What sample rate was this recorded at? 64k? I can't get it to sound right.
Aside from them not sounding correct on import, this is what I get under their info.
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It didn't convert automatically, I had to convert in order to use them.