mix advice for turn back time

[doulos]

this is a quick track i did in pro tools have a listen tell me what you think

i fixed the link

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/?aid=2997/singles

 

[Blue Bear Sound]

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[doulos]

this is a quick track i did in pro tools have a listen tell me what you think

i fixed the link

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/?aid=2997/singles

 

[Blue Bear Sound]

Are you looking for comments on the mix or the song itself?

The mix sounds kinda murky.... no depth to the tracks... over-sibilant vocals and also no sense of air or space around them.

The song itself is allright -- doesn't seem to go anywhere though... needs a lot more work on the arrangement.

 

[billyshuler]

I liked the song. What if you have a higher sounding chord progression for when you say "if I could turn back time".