Mesmerized Again by Meursault

Meursault, do you intend to comment on music others have posted? Or are you here simply to take and not give back?
 
mesmerized again

interesting opening,
i like the groove

i like the rhythm breakdown.
i'd like to hear that underlying bass line a bit louder there......

this is a good start for a song,
but missing a vocal line to tie it all together,
it sounds half baked.
 
mesmerized again

interesting opening,
i like the groove

i like the rhythm breakdown.
i'd like to hear that underlying bass line a bit louder there......

this is a good start for a song,
but missing a vocal line to tie it all together,
it sounds half baked.

It is definitely music meant to have a rapper/singer on it.

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Meursault, do you intend to comment on music others have posted? Or are you here simply to take and not give back?

Sorry Robus.
 
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