"Lord of The Flies" Rock Song

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HydrantC12

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Me and a few other classmates are making a "Lord of the Flies" music video (you know the book about the kids getting stranded on an island). So i recorded a song for it...

Im kind of a newbie..but im curious on your feedback. Its kinda tribaly at points then it has a rock-like chorus. I dont have to much equiptment so i didnt get to the bass drum yet. So thats way its not in the mix. I didnt get to the vocals either so there not in there either. I just want some comments on how it is so far and what i can do to improve it. thanks!

 
nice song

I liked the song. I really liked the guitar lines in the chorus. The snare drum definitely needs to come out and sounds like its missing a lot of its high end. It also sounds like the drum beat gets a little bit off at times, especially with the snare. I'm interested to hear what this sounds like with vocals.
 
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