Looking for some feedback [Metal]

[omonoiatis9]

This is a cover song I recorded to practice. Drums are programmed with superior drummer and bass is programmed with Trilian.

Playing: Tapestry testtest.mp3 - picosong

Thanks for the feedback in advance.

 

[Robus]

Try backing off the boosting and leveling on the master buss. This sounds like a case of "death by mastering"--a leading killer of otherwise perfectly good mixes that I hear on this forum. All that processing is destroying your dynamics and emphasizing those nails-on-chalkboard midrange frequencies. The result is grating and gets hard to listen to.

Apart from that, I think it's a promising composition. Put some vocals to it.

 

[omonoiatis9]

Thank you. It's actually a cover though, not my composition. I only changed the song's structure a bit (intro and end)

 

[TripleM]

Overall I didn't think it was too bad.

The "stutter thing" in the intro is kind of hard on the ears - at least on headphones.

The lead guitar sounds nice. It sounds like it's in a different space from the other instruments. It's much dryer.

Rhythm guitars sound OK.

The low end is really loud and boomy. I'd take that down quite a bit.