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I’m Doing This For You
This Pen: Is A Syringe...
Drawing Blood,
Straight From My Heart.
And...
With Each Line I Cringe,
But... This Is, Love,
&: Nothing Less Will Do.
So, as my vision blurs...
I’ll, Bleed another word.
Give all; that I'm worth.
For... This Is, Love,
&: Nothing Less Will Do.
I'm, Doing This For You.
I’d Do Anything,
For You.
Just wanted some feedback on this.
I know the punctuation is distracting
But I'm not too concerned about that.
I use the punctuation to help me remember the rhythm I want.
Thanks in advance.
This Pen: Is A Syringe...
Drawing Blood,
Straight From My Heart.
And...
With Each Line I Cringe,
But... This Is, Love,
&: Nothing Less Will Do.
So, as my vision blurs...
I’ll, Bleed another word.
Give all; that I'm worth.
For... This Is, Love,
&: Nothing Less Will Do.
I'm, Doing This For You.
I’d Do Anything,
For You.
Just wanted some feedback on this.
I know the punctuation is distracting
But I'm not too concerned about that.
I use the punctuation to help me remember the rhythm I want.
Thanks in advance.