Drums seem to be pretty high, levels on a lot of parts seem inconsistent actually. Very quiet in the beginning with a long crescendo that doesn't work so well for me. Awesome song, I hear some prog bits with an industrial beat, really neat combination of different influences. Nice vocals, lots of great elements imho.
Lots of interesting instruments combinations. There wasn't enough happening in the 1:45 intro to keep me entertained on the first listen, but the second I got into it more.
There a touch of King Crimson about it. The clarinet/sax? at 2:45 sounded poor/exposed/weak in contrast to the other excellent sounds.
The main vocal is ok, and the effects on it really help, but it sounds a little under-powered/warbley on occasions.
The overall mix and song sounds excellent to me. Really nice sense of depth. How have you achieve that?
The riff is early Crimsonish.
There are parts that are late period Crimson too - the Belew type guitar noises.
The sax is a step down in tension in the wrong place for me.
Interesting stuff. Def well worth repeated listens.