The crash cymbals are freaking me out! Too loud, too far apart, too dry.
I think just a little more of the dry vocal mixed in over the top of the effecty thing would probably help. I think the effects are appropriate for the genre. The vocal itself is buried a bit even more my tastes. Not that I really want to hear that particular vocal any better, but if that's what you're going with, then it needs to be a touch louder. (Soundcloud immediately launched into some a capela "Panama" thing :/ )
Then there's this weird thing happening where the guitars are pulling the whole mix around with them. I'm pretty sure it's because you're slamming the whole mix into some heavy-handed, stereo-linked compressor. It's kind of unsettling. I think this might not be helping the crash cymbals either.
Edit - That all sounds like I hate it. Actually, I think most of the underlying sounds and performances are pretty good, and the overall mix is pretty close.