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acoustic guitar riff isn't very smooth. the timing of it seems off, but maybe that's what you were going for. i think the level of that acoustic in the beginning could be lowered so that when the distorted guitar comes in they have more punch. the electrics in general don't have very much punch and there are timing issues all over the place with the drummer and guitar player. Singer and bassist are pretty decent. i'm guessing you recorded the drummer live with maybe the bass and guitar, but these guys aren't a well oiled machine if you now what i mean. i think if you want to get the best out of this song i think you'd be better off recording to a click. Then you could multitrack the guitars better and get more punch out them. that or just rehearse more.
i wrote while i listened to the song.
Second listen: yeah i stick to what i wrote in the first listen.